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Memories from times past,

How can anyone make them last?


Ripped down off the wall;

Ive tried so hard to make time stall.


Nights of endless wondering,

while my heart was thundering.


My heart now black and hard like emery;

Left with nothing more than a shoebox memory.
©2006-2009 ~Yotaru
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All that's left of my recent relationship.
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Oh... shoebox memory. I like that. =D And hm... good go at the rhyming, just maybe try using more... imagery to make the poem seem a little more interesting. Nice try anyway! =)

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